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What Editing Has Taught Me Spiritually

In my last post, I talked about some practical tips editing has really grounded in me more as a writer.

Now, to move on, I would like to share what editing The Thrall’s Sword has taught me spiritually. (If you would like to learn more about my soon-to-be-published novel itself, click here.)

I have realized many things about God through this editing journey. I have learned that Jesus is the best Author whom I can totally trust and rely on to make my life into a beautiful masterpiece. When I trust in the blood of Jesus Christ to cleanse my soul, He deletes all the bad stuff out of me bit by bit and adds good stuff to me to make me more like Himself–holy and righteous before God the Father.

“God made him who had no sin to be sin for us, so that in him we might become the righteousness of God.” – 2 Corinthians 5:21

Still, it really isn’t about the adding or the deleting, it’s about the becoming. It’s about the getting closer to God Himself. It’s about touching a little more of heaven each page at a time.

This is a story I want to live each day, basking in His grace, totally aware that my salvation is a gift and so is this beautiful journey of becoming like Him.

It is only through Jesus, the Author of life, that anything could turn our clear, coherent, and powerful. Without Him, my life would be a mess of unnecessary gibberish, loose ends, and frustrating tangents. With Him, I can live out the grand adventure He has set before me with boldness and courage, just as I was created to do. (Ephesians 2:10). As I keep handing the pen to the good Author and Editor of my faith, I can have confidence that one day I will see His face. (Hebrews 12:2-3; 1 John 2:28)

Can you have this confidence, too?

God didn’t make any mistake in creating you, dear friends. He created you for a purpose: to live in this world like Jesus (1 John 2:6).

Give up trying to write your own story and hand the pen to the perfect Author. Let Him lead you and guide you along the pages, to achieve a satisfying story full of meaning and purpose. When you do, you can trust that every detail of your life God is work out for your good (Romans 8:28).

I certainly love Him, and I hope you do, too. Because no matter what happens in this crazy world, even in these climatic moments, God will bring about the perfect happy ending for those who choose the side that is good.

“Do not be overcome by evil, but overcome evil with good.” – Romans 12:21

“I have told you these things, so that in me [Jesus] you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have overcome the world.” – John 16:31

 

 

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Update: Editing Editing Editing! My Editing Journey + 3 Helpful Writing Tips

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Hello everyone!

I hope you all are doing well. In spite of all that’s going on in this world, God is still good and life is still worth enjoying.

I certainly have been able to enjoy myself, editing my novel these past few weeks. Getting lost in a fictional world is one of the joys of both reading and writing a novel. Even so, the real truths of fiction conveys can help one cope with reality.

An editor from the publishing company, Ambassador International, got back to me in April with her feedback on my novel. After I finished my finals for my college sophomore semester, I set to work.

At first I was overwhelmed by the amount of comments and changes she made or suggested. But gradually I realized how helpful they were and how needed. Through editing this manuscript, I have begun to form a greater understanding of what it means to be a good writer.

Oftentimes, I would say things in my novel on a whim that ended up not making any sense to the novel and in progressing the story. While I had fun writing those parts, for the sake of you all, the readers, you won’t have to read such a gibberish. 😛

Anyhow, I just want to take some time here to reflect on my editing journey, as today I  finished editing my last chapter. While I still have more general edits to make throughout the novel, I feel like I have completed something important.

Here are three things I have learned from my editing journey:

  1. Be clear and concise. Yes. If you are a writer like me, you likely have heard this many times. Of course. It seems obvious, but how many times do I write wordy sentences while trying to bring across a profound message? Writing clearly and concisely sometimes means you have to be “less descriptive,” but in the end, it comes off more powerful.
  2. Say only what’s necessary. This goes along with #1, but it is more specifically about honing in on your point and deleting the rabbit trails. Saying only what’s necessary will help the reader  focus on what’s important and stay engaged with the story. Long, drawn-out tangents lead to frustrated readers.
  3. Show, don’t tell. I used to think this was too hard and too much to ask of me. How would the reader know what’s going on if you don’t tell them? Well, the truth is actions do speak louder than words. As I edited my novel, I realized how much pleasure I got when I deleted the “telling” parts and replaced them with “showing.” Showing the reader how the reader is feeling by them making a fist is more powerful than just saying: “Tristan felt angry.” Showing gives the reader a better and more direct picture of what is happening, and it makes them feel included rather than a bystander who hears what happened from someone else. So, it really is the truth: showing instead of telling makes a huge difference!

Anyhow, that’s the gist of what I’ve learned practically from this editing journey. It’s been a pleasure working on my novel with this fantastic editor, and I look forward to working on more general edits soon.

In my next post, I will share what editing has taught me spiritually.

Have a wonderful night everyone!

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I’m getting published!!!

Related imageHello there blog readers! It’s been awhile! I hope the Christmas season is treating you well! It’s that time of year to celebrate the birth of God’s Son, who came to earth in human flesh to one day die and pay the price of our sins. God loves you so much, and wants you in His family. If you haven’t made the decision, today is the day of salvation! Trust in Him and be saved from death and receive a new life with Him!!

So, aside from the greatest news of all, I’ve got some other pretty good news! Last year, my novel, The Thrall’s Sword, got accepted by a small publisher, Ambassador International. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to go with them at first, but, long story short, I decided a few days ago that I would go with them to publish my book!

I am beyond excited, and in my excitement God has driven me to wrestle with a few things. What exactly are my motives for writing and publishing this book? Back in 2014, when I started writing this novel, I would say I was passionate about writing and could think of nothing else I’d rather do with my free time. Historical fiction fascinated me; including the historical fact that Vikings had such strange funeral rituals as to burn longships on fire with all their possessions, along with a slave girl to supposedly serve the dead master in the after life.

While at that time, I wasn’t a great conversationalist because of my shyness, within the world of my novel anything was possible. I could create complex characters, character dynamics, tension, plot twists, and climaxes. Stories and people came to life for me and made me feel more alive than I did in real life at times. Writing books justified my existence, whereas in real life, I seemed to only be “half-there” or “half-alive” because of my shyness.

Over the years, I’ve become “more alive” in real life–all thanks to Jesus Christ! As I have grown closer to Him, I have begun to awaken to things that really matter. I have become a better conversationalist (though I am definitely still a work in progress!). I have grown in my love for people. I have begun to value time spent with people more than my writing. A new dream has sparked within me, to teach English overseas to build relationships with people, and to share the good news of Jesus Christ in a world of darkness.

My desires have evolved into more practical and more necessary areas of teaching a common language and saving lost souls. And, frankly, fiction writing seems like the exact opposite of that.

Nevertheless, as I have grown and changed, so has my novel. What started out as simply historical fiction with no mention of God, evolved into a transformational, redemptive story of God’s forgiveness. If you have ever read any of Francine Rivers books and liked those, then I think you will enjoy my novel. Her books inspired me to write a powerful tale of a hardened heart softened and restored. My main character, Sigrid, is very stubborn and will assuredly annoy you at least once, only to wonder at her transformation at the end. While my book is fiction, through it I depict beautiful realities, because of the many timeless truths such as hardened hearts in need of a Savior, and a God who grants forgiveness to all who ask for it. Thus, I trust that God will speak to each person in the way He desires through my novel.

Today, I am more in love with Jesus than ever. I am passionate about discipleship, and I long to give over my life to serving God wherever He leads. Most of all, my desire has become truly and simply to know Him more and more. He is good. He is kind. He is worthy!

As I look back at the years I have spent poring my time and energy into this novel, I wonder at the fact that I had so much motivation, so much thoughtfulness, so much care put into this work of fiction. The truth is, it astounds me that I was propelled so strongly to complete this piece and make it what it is today. It astounds me the amount of patience I have had these five long years.

The only thing I can do is give credit to God. He gave me the gift of writing, He gave me motivation, He gave me patience, and He gave me love for Him and faith in Him (as He does for all who ask Him!). The truth is, every ounce of credit goes to Him. Apparently He wanted me to write a book and get it published. Apparently He wanted people to read this redemptive story. Apparently He is doing something through my life that I could never imagined back in 2014.

It’s only because of Him that I exist, because of Him I wrote a book, and because of Him I am who I am today. I want to give Him the supreme glory, because without Him, none of this would even matter. With Him, we have life–fullness of life! A life with meaning and purpose.

Please pursue Him, because He has an adventure for everyone of His beloved children. Please love Him, because He loves you abundantly more than you could imagine. Please surrender everything you are to Him, because none of it was ever yours anyway.

Thank You, Jesus, for all You have done and all You will do! Amen.

Do you struggle with giving the credit to God? Do you struggle with having impure motives, and needing God to purify your motives? Comment below your thoughts. 

Thank you so much, and have a wonderful Christmas!

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6 Things I Learned at a Writers’ Conference

 

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Brief Update: So I realize I never explained what happened at the Colorado Christian Writers Conference back in May… Maybe I had an excuse or two: getting graduated from high school, parties, having a birthday, going on three trips in the summer, and now figuring out this college thing. Haha! So I’ve been pretty busy, and I’ve only had time to write for school.

In the future, when I have more time on my hands, I plan to query more literary agents for The Thrall’s Sword in hopes of getting a bigger publisher–if God wills it. Please pray that God would guide me in this process!

Last May I had the privilege of attending a writers’ conference, called the Colorado Christian Writers’ Conference.

I’ve heard many times that if you want to get serious about writing, you need to attend a writers’ conference. After all, that is the place where you can meet literary agents face to face to share about your novel and—hopefully!—acquire a better chance of publication. Who wouldn’t want that? Maybe I should go to a writers’ conference for my birthday party and all my friends can get published!

But… no.

While meeting a literary agent in person increases the chances of your success, there is a lot more to writers’ conferences than meeting literary agents.

Authors from around the U.S. gathered in these beautiful green, misty mountains like we were vacationing in Middle Earth. Each session offered various tips and tricks for Christian writers to become not merely skilled at adding Bible verses into stories, but great at writing in general, and incorporating a powerful message through a relatable and engaging story.

I realize that not every writer receives such a wonderful opportunity, especially a young writer like myself, so I wanted to share with other young writers some valuable tidbits I learned (with sprinklings of my own reflections here and there).

So here are six things I learned at that conference:

1. Write Truth and Write it Well. Books full of truth are desperately needed in this culture that applauds lies. But what if our truth-filled books were well-written? The perfect blend of truth and style will not only enlighten but also entertain your reader. When truth is woven in a story of intrigue, tension, and conflict, the reader is more likely to accept it than if you shove it down his throat. (Sorry to burst your bubble…)

2. Avoid predictability. Don’t make your book predictable. Push against the current of where the story naturally wants to flow and think outside the box. Are these two characters bound to fall in love? Give both characters goals that don’t coincide with the other, to keep the reader wondering how that will ever happen.

3. Make the story plausible. You’re striving to convince your reader to invest in the characters and plot for a few hundred pages, after all. Don’t make nonbelievers to always look stupid, and don’t exaggerate your spirituality! But if a part of your story needs to be unbelievable, have your character challenge the believability.

4. Avoid preachiness. Just avoid it. Avoiding it does not mean, however, that you add darkness to darkness. Be real, raw, and human, but be a perfect, spotless, brilliant light shining in the darkness at the same time. How do you accomplish that? Imagine the most perfect person who is also a human and you’ll be right on track. Yes—Jesus! You need Him to help your very human reader to understand our most Holy God. Pray, pray, pray! Which leads to my next point…

5. Keep God at the center. Your whole purpose in writing should be to glorify God. Don’t write to get famous or to get published, write so God can be famous and published! Always focus on Jesus as you write, because all that matters is that you are famous in His eyes. Colossians 3:23 gives a great picture of what our attitude should be as we write for God alone: “Whatever you do, work heartily, as for the Lord and not for men” (ESV). So write heartily! Writing is no drudgery or meaningless pursuit when God’s beautiful character and truth is soaked in the story from beginning to end. Always remember that it is He you are writing for, and not for men. He is your biggest fan.

6. Don’t be discouraged. If you ever feel discouraged, think about it this way: all you have to do is take the next step in your writing journey. Never let overly critical people stand in the way of you following Him, and don’t let the enemy tempt you to procrastinate. Your writing is a weapon to fight against the enemy, and there are people who need and are influenced by good writing. Once you surrender your work to God, you’re allowing Him to change people through your writing.

The Colorado Christian Writers’ Conference was an amazing experience that gave me a bigger view of how God is working through Christian writers. I presented my novel to one literary agent, though she wasn’t interested in publishing it. But even if you aren’t able to meet an agent, I definitely encourage you to attend a writers’ conference if you want to improve as a writer.

Whether or not you attend a conference, you can always write for the glory of God. And writing for God’s glory includes drawing the reader in to a realistic, captivating story. Once people see the great author you are, you can point them to the great God who used you. Writing isn’t just a hobby. It’s a powerful way to point the world to Christ.

So, please, keep writing. Even if you’re in college like me, you can always find ways to write that beautiful truth that people desperately need to here (through essays and such!). Write the unexpected that shakes readers’ understanding of the world, and yet make it believable enough to keep the reader engaged. Incorporate truth gracefully and discreetly, so the reader doesn’t cringe at your preachiness. Keep God always at the forefront, as your Guide through the process, since He is the Author of all truly great stories.

And finally, never be discouraged. Your words could be the only light shining into a dark soul.

“The light shines in the darkness, and the darkness has not overcome it.” – John 1:5

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An Update and an Excerpt

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Hey everyone! I have been working on sending query letters and book proposals to literary agents. I need a literary agent in order to present my book to good-sized publishing companies. Next week I am going to the Colorado Christian Writers’ Conference, where I will not only meet with other writers and learn a lot, but I may have the chance to present my novel to literary agents face-to-face! Prayers very much appreciated. ❤

And without further ado, here is an excerpt from my Viking novel, The Thrall’s Sword. Comment your thoughts! 

“I screamed as a wave crashed over me. The ship turned over, the dark mass smothering me, driving me down into the depths of the sea. My instincts took over, and I swam away from the ship, escaping the ship’s malicious urge to drown me. The current whipped me about like I was a mere strand of seaweed. I kicked my feet violently and paddled my hands as my father had taught me.

A wave roared above me, so I swam to the only safe place, deep under the water, holding my breath and sinking down into the cold silence of the sea. I squinted my eyes open. For a moment I forgot I needed to breathe, and I just stared at the beauty of the ocean—the undulating greens and blues of the water, the fish that were darting about, trying to flee the chaos the arrows had caused. Then I saw the ship sinking slowly, a cow drowning alive, and bright gold coins twinkling as they sunk along with the rest, journeying to the after-life. And I saw Mum falling slowly, her chest bloody from the sword, her brown hair wild about her—her beautiful, beautiful soul.

No more.

Sorrow overwhelmed me. But I couldn’t—I couldn’t breathe.”